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I am me by ~Bwadarkon:iconBwadarkon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


I am me.
And I am you.

I’m the person that laughs with you when something funny happens
I’m the person that sheds tears with you whenever something bad happens
I’m the person that comforts you when you are sad
I’m the person that supports on you whenever I need to

I am the moon
And I am the sun

I am the love you feel whenever that special person is around
I am the hatred you feel whenever your enemy is mocking you
I am the anger you feel whenever you are pissed
I am the passion between two lovers in their most intimate moment.

I am the earth beneath
And I am the sky above

I am the light that leads you on your way
I am the darkness whenever you are afraid
I am your courage whenever I need to be
I am your hope and I’ll be there for you

I am no more me
As I am you
©2006-2009 ~Bwadarkon
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Author's Comments

this is a poem that suddenly came to me, don't know where i got the inspiration from but it happened while i was at work, i know wierd place to come up with stuff but hey.

i hope you guys give me advice on this poem and it will probably be a while before i can write another one.

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~HerazioX Aug 24, 2006, 10:12:31 AM
Welcome B ! It's fun to have you here on DeviantART and congratulations on this poëm. I just favorited it so yay ! ^^
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~Treiden Aug 24, 2006, 2:04:24 PM
It's a very good concept for a poem, but I don't have the whole "this gives me goosebumps" thing with it. Maybe because there's not really a solid text structure, or maybe it's because I'm not much for the open poem structure thing.

I still enjoyed reading it though, so keep it up ^^
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~jornvdcb Aug 25, 2006, 4:42:56 AM
I think it's a very good poem, it doesn't need to be perfect i think. It are the feelings of the writer that decides how the poem is going to be, Nicely done benito

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-Jorn VDCB-
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